100 Word Story: The Monster
I recently entered a couple of stories into the National Association of Writers’ Groups 100 Word Mini-Tales competition. Suffice it to say I didn’t win, but since I believed in the potential of every one of the stories I entered, it seemed only fitting to try to publish them elsewhere. I selected this one to publish here on Penstricken after the winners of the competition were announced. I’ve made a few small improvements so it’s probably not exactly 100 words anymore but hey… At least it’s a better story now. The rest, I’ve since submitted to other places.
As ever, what follows here is entirely my own work and has not been published anywhere else in the world, whether on print or online, nor do I expect it to be since the competition winners have already been announced. So, without further ado, I give you…
by. A Ferguson
Captain Harold of Earth’s Space Navy had met his share of bizarre alien cultures, but nothing like these. These were monsters.
One of the Creatures stood over Harold, injecting him with chemicals and mutilating him with ferocious tools. The Creature had cold blue hands, shining black eyes and no mouth (yet it spoke). A human female observed nearby, desensitised to the atrocity she was witnessing.
The Creature stepped back.
‘There, that wasn’t so bad,’ it smiled.
‘What do you say to the dentist, Harry?’ the human (code name: MUM) goaded.
They had practiced this before they left the house. Thank you Mr. Riley. Harold’s mouth was still numb but he had to try…
‘Yeour a monsther!’ he screamed.
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This is cute! It reminds me of a Calvin and Hobbes comic
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Thanks! I’m glad you liked it 🙂